RhongoMyniadX

tis is beautiful..

NO!!!

Umm.. SAY WHAT!?

"I WANT TO GO HOME!"

Please never this! I believe in you I'll join you in this Journey BROTHER!

oh yeah forgot to mention, you also have one of the best upload schedules I've ever seen, in other words...

this is one of the best uma musume fics I've seen so far.. the writing, and Grammer are almost perfect, the characters and there personality are nice,and I love how you did his personality and not being a almost psychopathic person, like many do thinking the world is just fiction, with a god complex im glad you didn't do that. Plus what you did with oguri, I loved how you added her background into this, with her legs being damaged much like her real counterpart. all in all love what you've done so far and the relationships and how they're progressing keep up the work! (BTW real life oguri_cap's mother refused to nurse them, and oguri was born extremely through being fed though eating significantly in turn, but after time got significantly better, though his glutinous eating habits still remained, this carried on to his retirement where he became quite fluffy we'll say, which is why you see the in game Oguri being a massive foodie, as seen with them ordering over 500 kfc full sized meals in the game.. Oguri_cap will always be my goat)