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    vparo2yr
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    I didn't like making this chapter I just feel like there are to many mistakes and it's flow is off

    After equipping all his gear jack looked at his map and went to a nearby NPC with a exclamation point above his head after reaching the NPC the NPC said h-hey you look strong can you help me jack smelling easy exp said yeah I can help you and what's your name and also what do you need help with the NPC my name's Jonathan and the sewers under the town have been infested with slimes if someone doesn't clear them out the town will be overrun after the NPC responded his name changed from a question mark to Jonathan and he got a prompt that he accepted the quest Clear The Sewers of slimes 0/50 with its rank being town and it's difficulty at easy
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  • vparo
    vparo2yr
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    it's okay that's all it is not great not bad just okay and as the author I'm fine with that please do criticize me it helps me improve but don't just say this garbage I'm dropping or dropped without a reason please tell me why it was bad

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