RandomGuy2648
Hi! I'm a person who likes to give their opinion on novels. And when I say opinions I mean honest ones. So if I leave a bad review on your book, either reevaluate yourselves or correct me if I'm wrong
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Soulbond? Soo... susurros?
I don't mean to put any spoilers out there but are these corvi the same ones from primordial dimensions?
Finally something good! It has been so long since I found something readable. The pacing is fine but I feel like the author needs to describe the surroundings and the atmosphere more. I have quite an imaginative mind which is fine and all but there has to be a limit. If the surroundings are not described properly then my imagination will go wild and imagine the most absurd things, ruining the experience. If I know where the MC is and what it's supposed to look like, then the whole experience will be a much smoother and more immersive ride. Overall though, it's an amazing first chapter.
I was actually saying that I was unsure if it was lucky halo or not but this works too.
Ah, I see. Thanks for the heads up. I was getting ticked off at the early OPness
I have an idea for an AOE attack for Kilzachs. You don't have to use it or anything it's just a suggestion for fun. My idea is a string of knives or something similar that he throws at the enemy, then cuts it, and pastes it in the center of the formation. If he's being encircled, he can use it to carve a path in the encirclement. The idea is that the momentum of the string of knives when he throws them would carry on when he cuts then pastes it in order to both confuse the enemy (if they don't know about his ability) and deal a good amount of damage to them too. Although, a string of knives seems impossible to throw properly so he can use something else more suited to his fighting style. As for what that is, I'm not sure. He could also throw one of his swords like a boomerang, cut it, then paste it like before to achieve a similar effect. Of course, this is just my imagination talking so you don't have to take this idea especially if it interferes with the story in some way. Sorry if the comment was too long.
Oh no it's the lubes, isn't it?
Or you can just take off its head.
Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.
Ok, hold up. The author said it took him thirty minutes to get to the temple. He searched around for treasure chests for an hour, and he also spun his talents before that. So let's say that spinning his talents took him like 22h 30m and he went to the temple, spent one or two minutes pondering where the mythical chest was, then found it, relished in his glory for four or five minutes before looking for other chests. That would make it 1d 7m before the world came to terms with what happened, and understood what they had to do, and left their livelihoods behind, blah, blah, blah. Now let's take into account that 22h and 30m for spinning talents are unreal because the mc would be feeling hungry and thirsty by then and would probably want to eat something. Common sense is also one of the reasons why it can't be that long. Even if it was one day, most people would be in denial, panic, or start riots down the streets. How on earth do they even understand what happens in a day let alone accept it? It's is a major plothole. I'm gonna drop the novel. I know it's just one plothole, albeit a major one, but this tells us a whole lot about what the story will be like further down the line. There will likely be a lack of common sense in many aspects and I don't think it's worth my time.
Probably.
Lucky halo.
Butterfly effect. Most of his knowledge will be useless so unless he gets a real prophetic skill like "clairvoyance" or changes his race to something like "banshee", (don't ask me how a guy can become a banshee. The novel so far seems stupid enough for something along those lines to happen) his knowledge won't help long-term.
I approve!
I read the book and I hate it. Let me explain why. If you have seen the synopsis of "Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start", then you should know that it sounds very similar to the synopsis of this book. I suspect that this book stole the original synopsis from "Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start". Now, you might say that "Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start" never wrote the original synopsis and instead stole the synopsis from this novel, making this the original. However, a review from Immortle_Turtal claims that "The synopsis is a lie. The MC didn't regress in time, there were no multipliers either, instead it's an enhancing system." I can confirm this because there I saw no signs of anything like a regression or a 10mil multiplier system. From what I saw, there were no similar reviews on, "Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start". By the way, I took screenshots of the synopsis from both books so that the author doesn't edit them and make me look like an absolute fool for writing a review that was "fake". As for why I'm making such a big deal out of this, there are three reasons. One, I want to justify giving a one-star review. Two, I think the synopsis plays a big part in who reads the book and who doesn't. I don't want to waste my time looking at a fake synopsis for a book, reading all forty chapters, and realizing that there is never going to be what was promised in the synopsis. And three, I just don't like copycats. Pretty much no one does.