I’ve went back to previous chapters and edited the text and punctuation, I hope this eases the reading experience, I added some ambiguity to the words lessening the protagonists notoriety, thank you for the feedback let me know about recent chapters :)

An thank you, honestly I did not expect someone to read this, regarding your issue with the punctuation such things does improve however it seems that some are inverted I’m not sure why, also the first four chapter are a precursor to the story that I intend to go back to after I’ve fleshed out the story to a point of coherency, thanks you!