The idea isn't bad but work on your synopsis so readers like me will know what we're expecting to see I in the novel. Above all, you're an amazing writer.
This is the first time I've read your book and I miss say that I'm deeply impressed. Irene's character development and her love story is clearly detailed. Thank you for writing a wonderful novel.
I really enjoyed chapter 1. From what I've seen. The novel is fast paced and kinda draws everything together but writing is never easy. kudos to the writer.