dude, if you make a translation, mark it as a translation and don't try to pass it off as your fanfic. This is fucking disgusting. And Patreon in this situation only makes everything worse.

The only thing I didn’t understand was why it was necessary to set a counter guard on the MC. If you indicated that this world was about to die, then Allaya would rather send a counter guard to the threat to humanity of that world, but not to the MC

It sounds like you are jealous because you can't write better than the author.

Eh, it wasn't bad, but I lost interest in this fanfic, good luck to the author

Truly, you are simply the best Author!

To be honest, the only work where I saw a normally described large harem was in a kaleidoscope. This same fanfic is increasingly turning into nothing more than pornographic reading for me.

Of course, all ninjas are born killers from the cradle...

As an author, I also have moments when I doubt the quality of a chapter, but I will write to you the same thing that my subscribers on boosty wrote to me. Any continuation of the story is interesting.

My favorite character is Hermione Granger, not only is she an example of one of Loserina's most loyal friends, she is also truly kind. Her only drawback, resulting from bullying in elementary school, is her inability to communicate with peers.

Thanks for the chapter.

To be honest, if there’s something I don’t like about this work, it’s the strong change in Asgard for the clearly worse side compared to the canon.

Perhaps others will not agree with me, but I believe that even 20% of the strength of a Shinigami captain should already be at least level 5 in danmachi

This plot is very naive, but that makes it funny.

GG just decided to become a meaningless villain out of nothing? I don't see any point in continuing.

Honestly, the excuses that Ai won't accept Ruby in a relationship are complete nonsense. And it would certainly be much more painful for her if Ruby hated her because she couldn’t be with GG for such an idiotic excuse.

The option to recruit Haku is so fabulously cash-in-hand that it's downright annoying. And he won’t be able to settle safely in Konoha as long as Danzo is there.

The only flaw is that Kakashi has been inactive for too long. The surprise option doesn’t work because it’s too experienced.

Amazing

Is this webnovel glitchy or did you actually copy the chapter text twice?

Well, that's it, come on, it's time to wake up and show all sorts of goodies.