Seems like your suggestion won. The chapter is called "Beyond the Portal", now. I'm curious though, as to what it had been called, originally.

Alchemy level -1 was still left off this list of Skills, again. If you can update it, author! 🙂

Author, you forgot to list "Alchemy lvl -1", inside the list of Skills. Hopefully, you will be able to edit this later. 👍

Don't bother attempting to read. The only thing good this story has going for it, is the fact that not "every" girl is out to destroy her. The plot is sub-par and bounces around with no rhyme or reason. Character development is horrendous. Main character never learns who her family is (even though the reader learns it), and the love story itself is lame and not very well thought out. To make matters worse. One character never fully gets explained thoroughly, and another character seemed to have been abandoned and totally forgotten about by the author.

The story was good! But, it stops at chapter 24, and hasn't been updated in over a year. If you want to read the entire (completed) story, then read it on WattPad, as was mentioned by a previous comment about that is where the original story was published. That being said, I love the story, and it has a good background to each of the characters. Can do with a bit of polishing though, but still not bad! It does have quite a few Typo errors that need fixed in each chapter, but they are pretty minor, and in no way takes away from the joy of reading the story.

It seems this story was dropped? It hasn't been updated in a year. Too bad.

Typo: Jackson => Jay

Typo: San => Han/Rehan

I'm crying so much right now! 😭😭😭

A mother isn't just someone who is a blood relation. A mother is also someone who raises you, despite if you are blood related, or not! This is so sad, hearing him say this! 😢

Again... silver haired, not black haired.

Silver haired, not black haired.

Jay had silver hair, not black hair.

This chapter was DARK! But I liked it!

Kenji mentioned in chapter 2 that Rehan's name was printed on his books. Plus the teacher called him Mr. Parks.

Loved this chapter! It was awesome! 😁 I can totally feel the emotions from Rehan!

Very good start! A few very minor typos, but overall it was a very nice start to the story. Nice job!

3 Likes for Exp please?

"Let's play little kitty!" 🤭

Typo: with => what