main character are you serious? 3 thousand points for this? Are you passively farming points or what?

How boring. “I was afraid of your reaction,” they, “What, we would accept you,” he, “I’m so glad,” I, “how unexpected, who would have thought, a good family, this is so unusual, how interesting , I don’t care at all.” Reading about ideal relationships is as boring as possible, no empathy or insight for Ethan’s parents, the usual beautiful templates, if the main character was an orphan in a past life, then we can say that the author has completely given up on family relationships.

Sword? Haha, he will be laughed at, who in their right mind would use a sword when there is an Avada Kidavra? Even teleport does not solve this problem; you can wave your wand faster than swinging your sword. It looks cool for an ordinary person, but hilarious for a magician. The overwhelming power of magic is what has power and respect.

It’s a pity that he didn’t say something like: “Back in the Hokage’s office, I thought about saving your reputation, but now I understand that you are absolutely not worth it. I didn’t feel any special love or affection for you, I just didn’t wish you harm, but now I see that you’re not worth it at all. Tell me, what did your loyalty lead to?! To death not by my hand? to trying to kill the hero of the leaf? Trying to kill your own son? I hope you're glad you at least tried it. (but actually everything is good, especially the ending, the cold laugh is really good)

And all because Hiruzen is a politician. If Tobirama were here, no one would dare to do such an act, because Tobirama would not tolerate it, and would immediately hang the culprit by the balls. It’s surprising that these are his students, who would have thought that the students of the smartest Hokage were such scum. Both go to two extremes: one is too soft, the other is too hard. How did he do it?

Let me remind you that the main character is reincarnated into Minato and he is definitely over twenty. Why he liked the child only God knows.

The main disadvantage of reincarnators, without a doubt, is that the character remains the same. Not everywhere, but here yes. GG wants to become Hokage, protect the village, be with Kushina and give birth to a child, also according to canon. Why ? Well, he just has absolutely no goals of his own, he wants to become Hokage simply because there must be a canon, he trains because there is danger nearby, and even in training there is no individuality that a reincarnator should have, if not for the presence of the daughter of Tsunada and Mikoto it would be even harder to read, a slightly improved version of Minato even sounds boring

Daughter of Tsunade and Kushina. It will be very difficult for the main character

What nonsense, zombies everywhere, apocalypse. gg: It takes several hours to bury the corpses of random zombies. I realized this with people in the beginning, but spending so much time on unfamiliar zombies is too stupid.

Sarutobi is immediately perceived as a politician, the “I know, you understand” manipulation is a really smart move that only a politician can make. Although I believe that politicians should not exist in the shinobi world (in a world where strength is everything), but when strength and will are not enough, this decision, albeit weak, is characteristic of Sarutobi. Well, a quick change of relationship is also good, if somewhere this is said only in words, then here in reality. I would also like, of course, for the main character to later leave the family due to the gradually increasing tension (it’s boring to establish relationships). What is worth saying is that it is stupid to demand compensation; the main character will show fangs, which Hiruzen would clearly prefer to chop off. The main character, of course, can bite very hard, but this bite will not be fatal. (I hope the author will explain this in the next chapters with the help of some Kushina, who will also not be happy with the softness of the main character)

Yes, but they don’t know the full strength of the main character. And there, even if it’s not lvl Madara, you still have to be afraid, there’s no second Hashirama

The family part is super, not typical ideal family relationships. But the trial of the lvl kage is funny. If the heads of other countries knew about this, they would die of laughter. The main character killed the biju, what claims could there be against him, even in theory? There is no Madara on them to show the level of kage.

The story is amazing, one of the best I've ever read. Let me not really like the main character, but he is written quite well, and therefore does not cause anger. Unfortunately, I can’t say much about this fanfic, but it was very pleasant to read