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Ahmed_Bakri

Ahmed_Bakri

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2021-05-09 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ahmed_Bakri
    Ahmed_Bakri3yr
    Commented

    You could use a different insult like nerd

    "Hey, just because I got held back a year when I moved here doesn't make me old. I'm only six months older than you, you weasel."
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  • Ahmed_Bakri
    Ahmed_Bakri3yr
    Commented

    You would regret it is a quote within a quote so you can add single quotation marks 'You would regret it'."...

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  • Ahmed_Bakri
    Ahmed_Bakri3yr
    Commented

    No need to repeat his name, use pronouns

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  • Ahmed_Bakri
    Ahmed_Bakri3yr
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    You're* Sincerely Ashforest

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