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i know this sounds absurd but few years ago i used to read a novel on mtl where mc strats with a panel type cheat and beast taming power in a semi post apocalyptic world where beasts have this beast spar or crystals in them that could be used to upgrade the beast tier and our guy basically helps a small turle that gains size and soil manipulation and goes on to build a city on top the turtle and resolve the apocalypse by spreading seeds of his like tier10 plant to bring change. sorry for the rant if you could find and translate this i think a lot of people will like it.

This has already been translated couple of times on this website look for pokemon fanfics around 500-600 chapters you would find them.

make the dialouge in normal speaking terms cause lines like systematically constructing and deconstructing once or twice is ok but using sentences like these multiple times will make it seem more ai driven

Mc is all muscles and no brain.

Mc feels like a cheap creep and a broken recorder going on about his 190 cm frame and his past as 28 year old salary man that bargains over cheap stuff and comes off as a technical master when all he does is spam haki every instant to recognize pagterns.

Thank you for the chapter

same novel as pokemon:Making pokemon stronger through happiness which has better translation and further chapters.

Thank you

shadow slave 3 rd person perspective works cause it takes a lot of world building to make that story and people are ok with it cause every chapter leaves on a cliffhanger that hooks people up and people mostly dont critisize on it and you can just organically write stuff like lets say he infiltrated the stark building and continued on his dumpster diving and use common english you dont need ai writing like he blended with the shadows proveling unseen and if you read enough it shows that it used human effort and ai.hope this helps