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That’s honestly a fun way to explain Sylvia’s nature. At times it feels like she can pester too much but this is a good reminder of why.
Elysia, the Harem Queen.
So Elysia wanted a cute cat girl enough to wish for it hmmmmm!
I’m a big fan of the story. There is a lot I could gush about from how well written the core cast is to how well fleshed out they are. The subtle hints at Elysias power growth and how you’ve written her wonderfully as being overpowered and humble without falling into the bad tropes of that. If I had to complain on anything its maybe spreading the storyline too thin. Earth was a great way to wrap up her background and give her closure but adding an entirely new war of the gods arc, new secondary cast and such felt like stretching the plot too thin. I’d have preferred the Ruvoid god stay dead and all that plot stay hidden until after the ruvoid war if it is even needed.
This makes me wanna scream. Even if he is reborn you seal his butt to mortal level until you have time to deal with him.
Why not just seal his power entirely? Elysia using a copy of the earth gods seal with her power tier would be straight up unbreakable.
Yknow what? I adore Noelle and she seriously brings some common sense to the party. But I actually like her reluctance and consideration for ending it. As much as I like Noelle having someone turn down our MC on a permanent (or even temporary) basis could also be an amazing bit of character growth. Honestly considering her hang ups I’m more surprised she’s still looking for new girls it seems and not more clinging to the ones in her group. That said you are doing a great job and I’m eager to see how she grows.
Yknow I wonder when Crystal, Dixie and Sam will just start referring to themselves as Emilia’s Harem. They are starting to thrive alongside the other girls and while they’re all technically poly (despite Emil’s jealousy), I feel like they’d get a giggle describing themselves as her Harem.
And see that wasn’t the vibe I got. I felt in a well Xianxia style vibe; Cynthia is cultivating chaos which means she’s always fighting for control. Everyone Cynthia has met on the same path had to fight for control. And then she realized her Host pretty much has a Chaos-Root; Natural talent. I imagine later on we may learn Cynthia chose our MC cause she felt ‘compatible’ too.
See I picture Dixie as the tiger and Crystal as the fox. Both carnivores but the fox will wait for the right moment and the tiger will just crush your defenses.