Gabriel_Hill4Real

An amazing novel. I do admit, I was confused at the beginning, but as I went on, I started understanding more and more. There are a bunch of typographical errors, but I think the plot of this story makes it hardly noticeable

"handsome" 😂 I like the way he thinks

She is officially my favourite character. Please who again is their mother? Mum who? Her opinion is not valid

Thanks for the review. I've returned the favour👍

The very first paragraph of this novel already drew my attention. The writer's grammar is on point. He/she must've really been listening in English class. However, I do believe the chapters are a bit too long to be one chapter. Apart from that, every other thing is perfect. His use of commas is moderate, his paragraphing is okay, and his main character actually has a personality. Good job on this one

I love it when the very first paragraph of a novel is so aggressive 😩⛓️

Yesss

As much as I hate to admit this, Adanna is right.

You had to make the poor dad die!😥💔

My leading character literally has the same last name. And his initials are also J.B. This alone is making me read more!