VoterWoman

Oho, good story. I approve of this. Nod. The mc is damn crazy. He just cuts off his legs and arms for power?? Damn. Just. Damn. He is amazing. Give me more, will ya?

The story has improved a lot since when I read it. Just amazing. Let’s start with Izaya because EXCUSE ME?! SPECIAL GRADE?! At his age. Do you know how insane that is?! That’s like being a Level 100 boss in a tutorial mission. And the way he just rolls with it like, “Oh, Special Grade? Neat.” Sir. SIR. I would be screaming. And then there’s Gojo. Peak Gojo. Smug, cocky, ridiculously powerful, and just casually dropping lines like “Cluster bombs might do the trick. Maybe.” Like. What. This man is a menace, and I love him for it. The worldbuilding details. Chef’s kiss. Jujutsu High feeling all mystical and ancient, the gate opening like it had a will of its own, the way the atmosphere just oozes power. I FELT that. AND THEN. PANDA. Listen, I was NOT expecting a post-credit scene with Panda, but it sent me. The way he just pops out and goes, “Yeah, this kid is insane.” LIKE YES, KING, YOU ARE CORRECT.

The writing quality is fine, although it could be better. I like how you just released a bunch of chapters. For now the development is good, let’s how it goes further. What actually matters is the story, which is gripping.