The grammar could be fixed but overall the story is very interesting. I'm a bit disappointed by the lack of daily or weekly updates but I guess everyone writes at their own pace. I do not understand a few of the words so I would appreciate it if you would write the meaning in brackets.

The mom and the dad are both the same age but they look younger than they actually are. They had the child at the age of 20.

Please read the whole entire story before forming any opinions on any of the chapters. I'm sure that you have seen that this chapter is part one of a chapter. Also, this chapter was used to introduce new characters. I'm sure that new characters definitely make a difference in the story. But, thank you for your opinion.

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I recommend this novel to people who love this genre of novels. The author has done a great job at describing his characters, designing the world, and setting the vibes for each scene. The characters are not doing stuff for hidden reasons that make no sense when they are revealed and I love Mr. Hayashi's dream of his son marrying an idol and the little shrine for TWICE and BLACKPINK.

Great. The author has done a great job in setting the mood and vibes for each scene. I'm hooked and I hope that the author will not drop this novel

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