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  • mitsy0979
    mitsy09792yr
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    I feel like it's a copy and paste of a previous chapter. I'm guessing a premonition but to use an entire chapter to go over it again?

    Ch 49 Mine
    The Forbidden Alpha
    Fantasy · jpsina
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  • mitsy0979
    mitsy09792yr
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    the chapters are already short and costly, so including an alternate point of view that is almost identical to the previous chapter is frustrating and unnecessary fluff

    Ch 34 I knew
    The Forbidden Alpha
    Fantasy · jpsina
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  • mitsy0979
    mitsy09792yr
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    great job creating an emotional connection with the reader. anger, sadness, frustration, well done

    Ch 14 Chapter Fourteen
    Tame a Monster
    Fantasy · ShadeBladez
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