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"the fate of mermaid".story was exiting to read every chapter.and mostly I really like this chapter ."he surprise night" 🌃.chapter number 32.

I'm reading your novel,have to correct your grammar skills try to improve it. war ends episode I liked it and im now interested in how Melissa and Rubina are going to give that to him

Every had a good connection, and author gave good importance to every character.But you have to improve your grammar skills then it will be definitely a success novel

Melissa is basically a good girl, but I won't trust Rubina, cus she lied.And we don't know her character,[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]I think she came to ruin

This is really superb 👍👍 In every chapter there one thirst,,,And so interesting,, And every chapter has great content ,,,, This story was really pure imagination so please vote 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏