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WistfulMoonlight

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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight8mth
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    I feel like there's a fourth option missing : explore the Divine Serpent Empire, which seems the most dangerous.The order could be B, C, D, A, as I agree with others that the war with the other world can wait.

    Ch 490 Delarosa Marquisate (3)
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    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Replied to Shaq_Fu

    The first witch he killed at the beginning of the book was a mission from the system. But after that its mostly used to hunt them in bed.

    Considering he had the Witch Hunter System and the Assembly of Silent Night's members were called Witch Hunters, it would be strange if he did not think they had some relations to demons.
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    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    It was well executed and I enjoyed it, good job!

    Ch 134 I mean our Rio, Big Sister
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    My Wife is the Asura Empress
    Fantasy · thewhitesnow
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    While I enjoy the novel so far, it's getting really annoying how you keep repeating multi word noun to artificially increase your word count. In a single page of this chapter, you used Silver-bloom king sword 7 time when it wasn't necessary and it break the flow of the sentences.

    Ch 109 Mystical Equila Fruit
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    My Wife is the Asura Empress
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Can you please stop using 'the orange red haired beauty' multiple time per chapter? It's starting to get annoying, just use 'she' or 'Eve', it flow much better and it's easier to read.

    Ch 103 Osculated by a Beauty
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    My Wife is the Asura Empress
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Replied to thewhitesnow

    The bathtub scene followed by the blood sucking scene was awesome, keep going like that and it will be perfect!

    Ch 72 Offering Herself To Husband
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    My Wife is the Asura Empress
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Well... that chapter was disappointing and leaves a bad taste in my mouth. He's really going to forgive her just like that because she had 'good intentions'...

    Ch 123 Rosalyn Shadowgarden (4)
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    My Vampire Little Sister
    Fantasy · Yunniye_Snow
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Lord Brother is such a cold and impersonal way of calling someone, it really doesn't fit Irina personality. Just Brother was much better.

    Ch 91 Ysabelle Blackburn (2)
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    My Vampire Little Sister
    Fantasy · Yunniye_Snow
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter and Happy New Year! I hope the backstory isn't stretched too long and we quickly go back to the present. I can't wait to read more!

    Ch 164 Taboo!!
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    Plundering in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Dakshay
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Where's Vivian? She hasn't been mentioned since they went to sleep. It's a bit weird that she's not present at the table.

    Ch 369 Broadening horizons (part 1)
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Replied to Barion_Trident

    There's no comment in chapter 280, maybe it got removed?

    Ch 282 A strange mission from the system (part 3)
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    In my opinion it's better that way. I would have been slightly disappointed if they counted that fight as Nux win.

    Ch 543 I expected no less from you, Lady Astaria~
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    Supreme Harem God System
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    It's hard to rank them as they're all good characters, but for me it would look like this 1. Thyra 2. Skyla 3. Evane 4. Amaya 5. Astaria 6. Ember 7. Felberta 8. Lane 9. Edda 10. Allura 11. Arvina

    Ch 537 I passed out huh…
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    Supreme Harem God System
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 339 A family break (part 1)
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Replied to Rvein

    Sadly it turns into a bi-harem 300 chapters in with no warning.

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    Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
    Fantasy · invayne
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I'm caught up on both of your book and now i'm sad that I have to wait for more. It's been a while since I've enjoyed a book this much. You're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read what's next!

    Ch 256 Man proposes, god disposes and the demon decomposes (part 2)
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Replied to Sil3nt_1

    For sure, Erin is such a good character, its always fun to read when she is involved. Aura come in close second for me, she is just so cute!

    Ch 229 Cute wolf & Cunning fox (part 2) R-18
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Replied to Barion_Trident

    I understand and I still really like the story, that's why I'm trying to give some feedback. Here's a few things that could have been better. Definitely give less details about the fight between minor characters, so it can be done in a few paragraphs instead of each fight taking multiple chapters. You can always give more details later if the character become more important. Also, since you are already introducing a lot of new characters and their relations between each other, if on top of that you start giving more details about the power system, it really slow down the pace and that's why it feel like an info dump. Lastly, I enjoy both of your books and I hope you can continue for a long time!

    Ch 208 The pride of the Argent family
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    I enjoyed the novel so far, but the tournament is so slow and it's starting to get boring. We're not even halfway through the second year and I don't know if I can continue for much longer. Also, since the goal is to select the captain, I don't see why there's so many fights. The whole thing could have been much faster with just the top 5 fighting. Maybe it's to introduce new characters, but there's so many of them that by the time they become relevant to the story, we'll have forgotten about them. What I'm trying to say is that instead of being exciting, the tournament feel like a huge infodump filler that could have been avoided.

    Ch 208 The pride of the Argent family
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • WistfulMoonlight
    WistfulMoonlight1yr
    Commented

    I'm not impressed with the sect so far. The goal was to make a strong force for Lilia and her friends, but its so divided that I doubt it would be effective. The amount of malice and pettiness is far beyond healthy competition. Even the supreme elders are hostile between each other instead of working together.

    Ch 322 The first and only one (part 4)
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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