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The first witch he killed at the beginning of the book was a mission from the system. But after that its mostly used to hunt them in bed.
While I enjoy the novel so far, it's getting really annoying how you keep repeating multi word noun to artificially increase your word count. In a single page of this chapter, you used Silver-bloom king sword 7 time when it wasn't necessary and it break the flow of the sentences.
Thanks for the chapter. I'm caught up on both of your book and now i'm sad that I have to wait for more. It's been a while since I've enjoyed a book this much. You're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read what's next!
I understand and I still really like the story, that's why I'm trying to give some feedback. Here's a few things that could have been better. Definitely give less details about the fight between minor characters, so it can be done in a few paragraphs instead of each fight taking multiple chapters. You can always give more details later if the character become more important. Also, since you are already introducing a lot of new characters and their relations between each other, if on top of that you start giving more details about the power system, it really slow down the pace and that's why it feel like an info dump. Lastly, I enjoy both of your books and I hope you can continue for a long time!
I enjoyed the novel so far, but the tournament is so slow and it's starting to get boring. We're not even halfway through the second year and I don't know if I can continue for much longer. Also, since the goal is to select the captain, I don't see why there's so many fights. The whole thing could have been much faster with just the top 5 fighting. Maybe it's to introduce new characters, but there's so many of them that by the time they become relevant to the story, we'll have forgotten about them. What I'm trying to say is that instead of being exciting, the tournament feel like a huge infodump filler that could have been avoided.
I'm not impressed with the sect so far. The goal was to make a strong force for Lilia and her friends, but its so divided that I doubt it would be effective. The amount of malice and pettiness is far beyond healthy competition. Even the supreme elders are hostile between each other instead of working together.