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I feel like there's a fourth option missing : explore the Divine Serpent Empire, which seems the most dangerous.The order could be B, C, D, A, as I agree with others that the war with the other world can wait.
The first witch he killed at the beginning of the book was a mission from the system. But after that its mostly used to hunt them in bed.
It was well executed and I enjoyed it, good job!
While I enjoy the novel so far, it's getting really annoying how you keep repeating multi word noun to artificially increase your word count. In a single page of this chapter, you used Silver-bloom king sword 7 time when it wasn't necessary and it break the flow of the sentences.
Can you please stop using 'the orange red haired beauty' multiple time per chapter? It's starting to get annoying, just use 'she' or 'Eve', it flow much better and it's easier to read.
The bathtub scene followed by the blood sucking scene was awesome, keep going like that and it will be perfect!
Well... that chapter was disappointing and leaves a bad taste in my mouth. He's really going to forgive her just like that because she had 'good intentions'...
Lord Brother is such a cold and impersonal way of calling someone, it really doesn't fit Irina personality. Just Brother was much better.
Thanks for the chapter and Happy New Year! I hope the backstory isn't stretched too long and we quickly go back to the present. I can't wait to read more!
Where's Vivian? She hasn't been mentioned since they went to sleep. It's a bit weird that she's not present at the table.