as I have reached the port of Valencia I have run out of coins this is what I think since I am paying for the book out of my pocket I dont like that the last 3 paragraphs are repeated as the first 3 paragraph of the next chapter that's ridiculous I also dont like that u put that piracy thing in every chapter that's ridiculous also ok maybe every 5 chapters should have the piracy thing but the reputation is not necessarily important for the story I do love the story it has huge elemental twist and turns and is very clever but u also tell the same events in two or 3 different POV which is also unnecessary but unique but not at my expense I think after I paid my coins for that chapter all POV should be in it before I start and pay for a new chapter should be a different event not the same event told from a different pov then paid multiple times for one event see what I am saying

I seen it in the web novel ad on my Facebook account many times I just read the 2 chapters in the ad and now I down loaded the ad just to read it because I use readit book site so I will tell you my honest opinion after I read all of it