Zach_Herold

All of it is really good and as long as the author keeps updating it, it truly deserves five stars. Im sure the world background will come in later on. The characters are awesome. The way the story flows like a river is truly magnificent and i can’t wait to see what becomes of this masterpiece.

I wanted the demon to have more of a look than the main character did that way the readwr could easily develop a better idea of what the demon looked like. I think my writing was pretty good all things considered. Its a short story this is as far as it will ever be updated. I also think i did a good jkb kn story development although I do think the horror parts were kind of sudden almost random. This is the second part to a memoir twist collection I am creating the first part is a book called “The Love Thats Everlasting”

It wasnt meant to have a world background i like how i bult the characters. This is the full story i dont update it. I do short stories. There wasnt meant to be much of a background anyways.

OLD?!?!

Im Very interested in gizmens life story

i completely agree. my favorite character Has got to be the doctor so far.

I like the doctor hes awesome

Amazing havent Read a single but yet but the title is amazing and im sure the book will be just as good be back when i finish it. I have amazing faith for this book and writer.