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Well… after everything, that happend there until Leonidas appearance… any words would be useless, no?
Well in FGO… Amaterasu. In GOW… if Ares in this fic isn’t gender changed, then I don’t know. Maybe this character was in books and comics.
Surtr lover and wife.
i think it something like "first, i will find my wife, then find my daughter will be easier"
It was revoked in this story... or it was even in canon?
I will immediately write, that everything described below is only mine and only my subjective opinion. There is no need to judge the entire book only by such a review, although I do not rule out a selfish desire to take into account my opinion, which has taken form of a review. Well... normally, I wouldn't write a review or rate anything at all, untill the very end, but something prompts me to make an exception. I placed my stars in the rating, as I rated the whole thing at the time of me reading chapter 130... I say right away, this will be... forgive me, author, and don’t accept this as your translator, if this is a translation... but this is quite difficult to read. Almost entire Dungeons arc, but I still didn’t understand, why the hero needed all this movement. Throughout the whole time there were a couple of very small references to the past of the main character, and this, as for me, is not enough to justify everything that he does... other than just the author’s idea, it seems. And this does not create even the slightest feeling... of reality behind the story. He just... is. He simply follows the road, that the system showed him, towards a goal that it is unclear? Why he, already distorted by rebirth and a harsh new life, needs it?! Without this connection to the past, the present... it is impossible for me to continue to follow the adventures of Primis, contrary to the warning of anyone, who wants to read this story.
If hatred was there all along… then it is not mind control. Manipulation? Yes. But, not that he wish her to be angry, just the sake of ”evil”? Once again, IF this hatred is hers truly… it more like breaking a bone for the sake of its proper fusion, I guess. Something akin to “anger is better than despair”. It steel cruel, and I doubt, that it was truly necessary to do. in such spawn of time as well, but… it’s already happened.
Adelle - Skyfall.
She was not. She was once mortal woman, that served this Family. Eventually she had become mother figure for them. And a problem was there - she was mortal, which she try to fix with power of Force-Nexus, but instead transformed into an eldrich monster of the Force - Chaos, Abeloth.
Sincere gratitude for such great work. I'll make my contribution? As a title for a hero, I suggest «Ol-Sol» - small modification of “Old Soul”. Which can also be tied to “ALL” and “COLlect”… Given, how “S” and “C” sound similar in certain situations, title «explorer//Collecter of ALL knowledge” can be applied. «COLlector of ALL knowledge» // «All-Col» // «Ol-Sol» // «Old Soul» - «The oldest collector of all knowledge in existence».
Why not?)
Like “Mystery solved”, or he studied those planets to their very cores.