anotheridiot

its perfect as it is but with better editing its gonna be legendary

yes

shut up and take my power stones and add moar chaps.

more i read more i need

its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it

dont forget to add tsunade in his harem

great chapter, now I have to wait for another chapter

what do you mean by another verse like are you going to send him to another world now?