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SapphireFire11mthCommentedstriking speed ≈ 22mph
Combat Strength: Bite force 180 kilograms, speed 35 kilometers per hour.- SapphireFire11mthCommented
length: 16ft 5in weight: 242.5lbs
Body: 5 meters long and 110 kilograms heavy. - SapphireFire11mthReplied to Bolder_Folder
XD
Type: Burmese python. - SapphireFire1yrCommented
... good job
However, her joy didn't last long. Xu Yuan flew up in the air and down again. This startled Zhang Wei every time. He was playing with the enemy. Xu Yuan, in a fit of overconfidence, overcharged and rushed out of the arena ring. - SapphireFire1yrCommented
"Jason noticed this and was unbothered…" "Jason was unbothered by what he noticed…" "Jason noticed this unbothered…" doesn't sound right. Saying "Jason wasn't bothered by what he saw…" sounds way better but, using your specific words, the first two I proposed are fine as well.
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were not was
Fortunately, none of them was strong enough against the force of more than one hundred prodigies with their soulbonds. - SapphireFire2yrReplied to KittyRaw
manaless
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Didn't he use that flower for the evolution potion he made??
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yea didn't it say that he could see up to 1,000m?
The ceiling looks thick too and I can't see through it, but who knows how far below the surface we are!' - SapphireFire2yrCommented
I'm surprised this isn't the start of a new chapter
*[2 months later]* - SapphireFire2yrCommented
*worsen your situation
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of not from
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de died = decided
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This little guy is like:
'Soul energy….MANAAA' - SapphireFire2yrCommented
Didn't he just say they'd attract to much attention??
It wouldn't be a problem to fight with his mana grade-1 Viridi-Starstream daggers, but the other things might attract unnecessary attention for the first few days. - SapphireFire2yrCommented
Just put one small rock in there... they could play catch
Gabriella's words caused Jason's initial excitement to disappear almost immediately because he couldn't imagine a way to customize his world while supplying everything with their required needs to survive, except if he were to use stones and other objects that were lifeless, to begin with. - SapphireFire2yrCommented
It was two and a half stars though right?
However, contracting a new soulbond now would be counterproductive, because it would amplify his physique and mana core size by a large margin. This would in turn, create too much suspicion about his soul-awakening star rating, which was barely at two stars and as such considered to be below average.