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The (I'm assuming) translation is horrendous. I cannot even tell if the story, characters, and world are well-written because the translation is distracting at best and incomprehensible at worst. I hope that this is fixed, as the story premise does sound interesting, and I would be interested in reading it, if only it were readable
Lin Jiao and Gu Quan were in an official and public relationship, even cohabiting, and for a few years. Their relationship seemed weird, though, as Gu Quan was ignorant of her family background or friends. He did not know she was wealthy and had powerful connections. The idiot that targeted her at this party, though, could easily see and identify whom she was hanging out with and see that she had powerful friends, in addition to making a guess that she might be important herself to have been invited to such a party in the first place. Gu Quan is an idiot for not knowing his own girlfriend, but the sleezeball is a total moron for trying to target someone like her.
This is a good story. The plot was not quite as predictable as expected. The character were interesting. The story suffers from some of the usual pitfalls of serialized stories (contrived plots, melodrama, etc), but that comes with the territory. My only complaint is that the rate of translation is slow, and some of the chapters have been divided to make more frequent updates with shorter content. Understandable, but not enjoyable.
Man, now I'm going to be in suspense for however many days it takes to find out whether or not the pregnancy is real.
Ok, this is driving me nuts. Will someone with a better memory than me PLEASE direct me to where this misunderstanding started? Or is it something we don't know yet?