Abused_Eve

man this is reletable. my parents teaching me to be good and kind to never hit a girl and so on. sadly they failed to teach me that people can be evil and bad. so childhood was real bad cause of naivity. Parents should teach reality to kids while yes trying to make them good but never forget to teach them that some people will try to use you or hurt you.

no op stuff but here we go with store giving stuff and quest giving stats. "No OP stuff here"

would of been good if characters were at least teens so that their character and actions would make more sense. (they dont act much like children at all and it does make story quite unbelievable.)

xD fantasy (its normal not fantasy)

you know that they are 5 year old... they would not act as teens and grown up.

no fixing mistakes. I guess no reader.

I read I learn mc does not know what happened is not sure if she killed her mom then few chapters later she learns that she remembered that her brother and ex were sus and wounds on her mother were sus and didnt seem to match hers then flashback ends she forgets that she remembered her bro and mate were very sus and blames herself for killing her mom prob 10/10 author fails in first few chapters and has memory of gold fish just drop it and don't read also there was 2 mistakes where mc was called he (as far as I read) anyways if story fails in begining and author cant fix it to make sanse then drop it and put 1 star to not help readers know that it's not worth reading (anyways going to remove negative review after fix if author comments on this after fix other wise this stays for people to see how badly it's doing in begining and to know how bad it will prob get later on ) Never lower yourself to mediocrity always seek perfection

Reminds me of a time when I didn't know what "brb" or other shorter versions of words meant.

some men call war an adventure.

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