ElihaThe3rd

Author did chiyo remarry again after her husband cheated on her? It said that in the first chapter Kyoshi was 10 and Hiina was 1. I am genuinely curious who is the father of Hiina. btw Great chapter!!!🔥🔥🔥

I felt like it was forced too much....

The story is unique and I'm kinda excited to see his future children................. . . . . . .......................

It's great the chapters and everything please do continue writing this Thanks!

Oh, It's in his sword

his original count is 1.5 mil but the sword is a different count

Thanks for that! I actually forgot to use 3rd POV

Welp! that's your perspective, I ain't gonna be angry I mean we all have our own preferences. If you really don't like it then please don't read it, but thanks for the feedback. I'll try to be more specific and detailed in my future fanfiction! :)

I actually upload first on Wattpad the gif and pictures are there too!

I'm excited for this