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I really liked this book when I started reading it back when there was around 10 chapters I like the relationship between DeeDee and MC (I don’t remember the correct spelling of his name) the villain and hero’s reactions to the stories was great and I understand the feeling and lack of morality the protagonist has but the more characters like Super Girl, Raven, Wonder Woman and Bat Woman become involved with the protagonist the less I enjoyed the story the only one out of all of them I believe actually like him is Super Girl. Geez even poison ivy doesn’t actually like him and is more attracted to the power given by DeeDee I will be honest I like these characters you have written them very well but Raven Made me super uncomfortable when she first met MC and DeeDee and that has not changed I am sorry if I offended you I just wanted you to know how much your story means to me and how much fun I had with your character
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I really like the idea of older male Ruby. You could change his semblance to make him more his own character and give him like a giant ax or something different maybe His weapons don’t work with dust because When the world ends there is no way to make it
[img=update] I personally love this story. The system isn’t to complicated to understand and with no stats the protagonist growth is entirely based on perspective. I hope to see more especially with the Naruto world appearing. I’m interested to see how civilians in that world will get the ability to play the games since mainly only ninja villages have computers.