also, I have an advice. I've seen just little grammatical errors and wrong spelling from your paragraphs, but not that much. You can improve your grammars through Grammarly, I've been using this when I start writing, it actually proofreads your paragraphs. It is very essential tho :)

Hi fellow author, your book really piqued my interest when I saw it. It has a sense of mystery on it, although I've not read all the chapters yet, I think this is an awesome plot, it has a dark theme, which is in my opinion, reaches the beauty of it. Cheer up bro, let your imagination shine :D

Omg!, thank youu!, I'm working on chapter 2 by now, I will do my best to release more chapters by next week!