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Reyna_Lavesque_3814dCommentedI know you already plan this, but I wanna ask, why is it that when the primordial are Universal why are the Titans also universal, the Titans are supposed to be at a lower tier, you can then put the 6 major gods on the same tier as the Major Titans
Too lazy to type all of them so all Titians are universal (different tiers though).- Reyna_Lavesque_3815dCommented
maybe he could enhance the planet
{Hi, people. I am taking ideas if any. Power stone too. A greeting would be great too.} - Reyna_Lavesque_38119dCommented
There is a mistake, its fourth bro not Mike
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Elysium and Aisle of the blessed are the two paradise in the underworld, with Aisle of the blessed being higher while Asphodel is the field of regrets
I've also been, experimenting, on systems or process's since I know I'll need one once the influx of souls gets to much. What I'm thinking of doing is making a section of hell with the same concept of hell from the show 'lucifer', where your guilt imprisons you, however instead of replaying just one moment/moments it replays your entire life like a movie until you repent. Of course, this just acts as a sort of holding cell until I judge them myself. Also since the Underworld acts like the final destination, hell and heaven, I added the asphodel fields, basically an 'infinite' field of golden wheat, where you reunite with family and are forever happy. It's a classic. - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthCommented"Makes sense. Guess Quill can't join either since he's a talking dick."
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I feel you brr, writing stories with phone dey frustrate someone like mad!!
"Shey this one dey whine¹ me no ¹" David said as he laughed - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthCommented
Shey you dey whine me "ni" not no, maybe typographical error
"Shey this one dey whine¹ me no ¹" David said as he laughed - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthCommented
This guy is supposed to have two cheats, but because of the steady development you want to give the story you neglect the most important cheat of all, thus leaving lots of obvious loopholes. The cheat I am talking about is his experience as a God with the 3 O's, especially Omniscience, cuz even though he does not have it any more, the knowledge he would have gained in his years should have been able to help him even more than the intelligence now. I mean why does he need to learn when he already knows all these before and you can't say he does not know it cuz he had omniscience before and you can't tell me he never once thought about the intricacies of science and energy before, so he should have knowledge of all this and not acting like a normal Mc that was suddenly transmigrated into the marvel verse. In short, the steady development you want to give him has been spoilt by his background as a God, you forcing it now just leaves a lot of loopholes in the story.
Ch 10 Omniscience in Marvel 10 - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthCommented
I don't get, in the beginning he already told his wives about energy, that they are all the same with different names, yet now he is acting naively and dumbly and also allowing someone with way less power level and experience compared to him to lecture him on energy, I mean did he lose part of his memories or something, cuz if not his power leveling is supposed to be smooth sailing without any bottlenecks
Ch 9 Omniscience in Marvel 9 - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthCommented
Limit it to marvel and DC only, pleasssssee
I'm in doubt about how to deal with the characters. I have some girls that I like in the novel, like Jean and Tsunade, but haven't decided yet. - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthCommented
Zaddies
They might be the fathers of the students, but only the students would know if those men were their dads or daddies. - Reyna_Lavesque_3811mthPosted
Honestly speaking, I am highly disappointed, a great story Like this was spoilt because of racism starting from the late 300 chapters after he went to the United States. He casually killed an innocent person cuz he discriminated against Chinese yet he did the same in his sentence to Africans just few chapter after the above scene.
- Reyna_Lavesque_3812mthCommentedHe was none other than…
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Is it a bird ? Is it a plane? No!!! It's Superman
He wore something similar to a gladiator's outfire with a chest plate bearing an S logo on it. - Reyna_Lavesque_3812mthReplied to CamillusSeth_
Is it a bird ? Is it a plane? No!!! It's Superman!!!!
"Superman!" - Reyna_Lavesque_3813mthCommented
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Feng Zhaoqing laughed, then said, "Perhaps the source of these corpse poisons is just weak. In terms of power... the Chinese zombies in our Da Xia can completely crush those Western werewolves and vampires!"