I’m a young aspiring artist/writer :D
hey guys it's me lemon and I just want to say thanks for all the support and love around this novel. Sorry if so e days I don't post chapters or I post but they are super short. I am working on school and suffering from writer's block. I hope to provide you guys with good content and chapters. sincerely - Lemon
Thats what i was thinking lolllll
This is such a good book, OMG! more people need to read this, is it ok if I tell some other people about it? Everything is just fabulous in this book! Keep up the great work![img=recommend]
I read to chapter 10 The writing is good I would suggest Grammarly or the free motion that I use ProWrightingAid, but overall the story development and characters are pretty good. I will keep reading but for now, this is my review.
I'm the author so obviously Im going to give praise to my novel... ... its a good novel i promise... 😤🙁😤🙁😤🙁😤🙁😤🙁😤🙁😤🙁😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
This is very good and I just can't wait for more chapters to come out and I just love your choice of words. Good job I cant wait to read more!
Ok, I think the story could be a lot better if you didn't rush it at the start and instead went into more detail about the mc and the world around her. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar could have been better and made the book more professional like instead of using "u" it should have been "you". that's all I needed to say. But the overall pretty cool concept, just a little rushed.
Your a very talented writer and I love this story already after the first chapter. You are very descriptive and the story development was a little slow at first but it picked up the pace and I can't wait for more chapters.
I love the story so far and I cant wait to see where this story goes. Your writing is chef's kiss and your grammar is good. I really love your choice of words and the way you use them