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Jay_W

Jay_W

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2021-04-29 JoinedGlobal
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  • Jay_W
    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Ouroboros001

    well I appreciate your input. I also know that if you could do better you would have. I don't mind criticism, but this comment is just blatant stupidity. 9/10 of genres re-use tropes and other things. Thank you for reading.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Helios_Sol

    Hahaha it's all leading to a point around chapter 75 to 100. suffering is a necessity of life. without it you can't be shaped into a nice person. I have first hand experience of it.

    Ch 50 Rosalie has been taken
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Helios_Sol

    He may be treated as one later. You will have to keep reading. Thank you for reading.

    Ch 4 Reijis awakening part 3
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Helios_Sol

    still a lot more to go. Thank you for reading

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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Nickjr321

    No need to thank me. I am happy that you read my work.

    Ch 2 Reijis awakening part 1
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Nickjr321

    Thank you for reading.

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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    I am trying to establish that being any star won't matter. it is how you use your power. I relate it to "with great power comes great responsibility" from Stan Lee's spiderman. Your power doesn't matter. its what you do with it that changes who you are. even if a system was in place how you use your strength can change a fight. I apologize if my explanation doesn't make sense.

    Orion shook his head as his eyes glow no I do not but I can feel magic flowing into him he has the strength of at least a 4 star warrior but is yet to even learn skills or magic. I want this boy ragnur I shall train him for 2 months.
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    Knowing, and believing are different. believing something can make it true for the mind like a placebo. if you were suddenly told you were a monster right after being killed would you want to believe it? I don't mean that to sound aggressive it is my sincere question, and my answer to yours.

    elsha scoffs "they don't even know what it means to be heroes. filthy human scum. reiji is puzzled and says "elsha...im human.."
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    To put it a different way imagine filling a large container with something. then forcing that into a small container via some method. That smaller container would break damaging the container. hence adding more power to a smaller filled container is pointless it will break. the container must match the amount. I don't believe in small things holding great power so I just made him older as his power grew. easier to go by my analogy though at least for me. change is inevitable it will always happen regardless of whether we want it or not.

    Ch 8 The first Princess
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    I apologize it is a bad habit I picked up in my younger days. If you see any mistakes feel free to let me know the chapter, and I will fix them to you. thank you for reading.

    Ch 2 Reijis awakening part 1
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to EmptiBlank

    no the body didn't match his soul. so a change was being made affecting things for his body. his previous age was higher. just took some growing

    Ch 8 The first Princess
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Daku_Doragon

    no since he was in on it. there was more going on than the missing people. I decided not to touch on it. But it was meant to be seem as a corrupt person gouging money ill set up a better situation in the future my apologies.thank you for your input it is much appreciated.

    "You know people are dissapearing, and that's why the price is the price. If you dissapear tommorow i will have to clean get rid of stuff and a lot more quickly.: Reiji nods and pays the price without further questioning.
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Daku_Doragon

    yes for reasons coming in the next few chapters I'm currently writing.

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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Daku_Doragon

    Also because you can't usually just jump it takes many quests. like a f rank adventurer could take a s rank in battle. It is all about the amount of quests for them . although I had him get help from the king for the inevitable setback

    Mary screams out." b.by..the..the king" she steps back and grabs the stamp and a black and gold card." you will start at the lowest rank. do you want me to explain ranks and guild points?
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    Jay_W2yr
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    You can't have character progression without struggle.

    Mary screams out." b.by..the..the king" she steps back and grabs the stamp and a black and gold card." you will start at the lowest rank. do you want me to explain ranks and guild points?
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Daku_Doragon

    there is a reason exp hasn't been brought up his system will change at one point.

    he laughs as his body crumbles and falls away.
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to Daku_Doragon

    yes I apologize I wrote that while on my 15 minute break. please next time leave a comment on the chapter so I may fix inconsistencies.

    The child is still crying. Reiji rubs their head affectionately. It's okay I'm sorry I hurt your food. The kid looks up and the covering hiding the rest of their face falls. a little girl with a battered look peers back at reiji. Reiji is slightly taken aback by this. Reiji hands her the meat skewers he bought. The girl hungrily devours them as Reiji smiles. reijis smiles vanishes as a man appears behind him without his notice.
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    Jay_W2yr
    Commented

    I'm fixing as fast as I can I'm sorry. I should have them all fixed by tommorow

    Ch 9 The so called heroes
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    Jay_W2yr
    Replied to THANATOS_

    I'm sorry I can't explain if I don't know what you are surprised about. but I will take a stab at a guess. the Duke is here as an engagement between 2 close elven kingdoms there are very few humans here but there are some. mainly kept as slaves or stewards. it gets crazier though

    Ch 8 The first Princess
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    Jay_W2yr
    Commented

    I'm sorry I don't know any eebnovels with the main character named art.

    Ch 7 The Mysterious Orion
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