Hi, Normally I'm not a big fan of slow plots like these, but you managed to keep it enjoyable and curious enough for me to go on and read the next chapters. I really like the MC so far. Keep it up!

Hi, so far, so good. The inly problem I have is that I can't come to terms with the main character, and there are a lot of grammatical mistakes in your story. But otherwise, keep up the great work!