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Alan_Jess_9187

Alan_Jess_9187

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2021-05-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Alan_Jess_9187
    Alan_Jess_91874mth
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    Oh boy! It’s on! Look out Lucy!😄

    Ch 24 Challenge
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    One Wild Night
    Urban · Miss_Behaviour
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  • Alan_Jess_9187
    Alan_Jess_91874mth
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    It’s so clear so far that Lu is the somewhat shy and timid introvert and Sonia in comparison is the wild let it flow extrovert challenging life! Am truly loving this story and the hilarious situations that both prime characters are able to create with there counterparts. Tom is playing his part like a first fiddle in a symphony orchestra! Lu has no idea what is going on! Lovin it! In it for the long run. Allison🥰

    Ch 21 Stalker
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    One Wild Night
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  • Alan_Jess_9187
    Alan_Jess_91871yr
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    I notice you have bee using the word “sits” when Veronica and Daniel are in the cafeteria consistently. The proper word is seats if you do a rewrite or corrections.

    Ch 11 Chapter 10
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    My sexy greek god matchmaker
    Teen · Myst3ryqueentory
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  • Alan_Jess_9187
    Alan_Jess_91872yr
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    If you should ever re-edit this story throughout this story you use him, her and his in thr opposite gender reference. Otherwise this is one of the best stories I have read on the net.

    Ch 83 Our First Date
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    Falling In Love With Miracle
    Teen · sirenbeauty
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