the only really valid point I see in your review is grammar. About MC following Arthur: it seems you lack the understanding of a 'chosen one' type of plot TBATE has. There is a foundation and clear path of power that is laid for Arthur to get stronger - because literally no other being can take the same path. If taking the same path is ruled out there is simply no way of creating a powerful character on a level of Arthur in this world without making character too overpowered from the get-go. And if you suggest to make a character not on the same level as Arthut I wouldn't want to read that if I was a common reader. your remark on story and character development is dumb. You expect drastic character and plot development from a read that isn't even past a 50 chapter mark yet? And I don't assume that the reader should know the story to fully understand the story. You want me to explain all of the foreshadowing I did just plain and simple? You don't want a sense of mystery in a read? You are not reading an encyclopedia lol

thank you very much

yeah☠

he just lives the best he can - he has people to call a family and strength to protect them. but as the plot progresses it might change👀👀

the hair holder he was talking about

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idk lol, but I'll try to write as quickly as possible

Great chap, keep up the good work

he will be all-elementalist

he is barely 8-year-old yet, wait 'till the plot progresses. Plus he wouldn't be as strong without Sylvia or Virion. Leo is gaining as much knowledge and power as he possibly could, without Sylvia and her Mana Filled cave he wouldn't have his Mana Sensibility, and without Virion he would've been a terrible fighter, because he had ZERO fighting experience in his past life(unlike Art)

Last Chapter made it pretty obvious, I think lol

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No

he is very expressive in his complaints

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yeah, soon😅