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Yuki_08

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my new account is Yuki_09

2021-04-30 JoinedMalaysia
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to Darkened7

    well if you want male mc that isn't bi or gay, I have this one other fanfic that isn't posted here but on ao3 and wattpad. I might post it here. There is no romance or anything. It's still WIP tho. It's called " Requiem " my wattpad acc is D0pp0k4nnonz4k4 and my ao3 acc is Error_404XP

    Sexuality : [Bi]
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to Yellow_Brick

    if you don't wanna read it then don't, bro ;-; easy.

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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to Trollface

    Your review really hurts me but I understand. Just so you know, I only do as the readers vote. I make Haku a girl because I wanted to make him straight at first. I was doing as the readers want, they wanted harem and I only go with the flow. I'm sorry if I upset you.

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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to VoidUzumaki

    I'm surprised you're in for it but ok. I might have some ideas for their romance. Good for you guys who choose this ship

    AkitoxKakashi?
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to VoidUzumaki

    no offense taken lmao, I just failed geography ,math and many more subjects and I'm not gonna lie, humans are stupid.

    Kakashi: what is the dumbest thing you ever believed as a child?
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to VoidUzumaki

    Dude, he doesn't like the pain that he feel when he died in his dream. He wanted to die 'peacefully' not painfully.

    I'm on top of a tall building. As I figured out, the body in my dream will not listen to me. My body moves itself and start to jump of the building. As my body fell, it now landed at the ground with a loud thump sound. My body is now fell into pieces, my body felt numb after a while. my mouth spits out blood, my breath quickens and I start to see black spots... I died again...
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Commented

    you have the worst act i have ever seen pls

    "Well look Ojo-san, I'm a ninja who was kicked out of his village for playing with little girls like you kekeke!" Sakumo's performance was practically perfect, one would even think he was really a pervert who likes little girls.
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    Reincarnated into Naruto with breathing techniques.
    Anime & Comics · patinhoDEUSVULT
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to faceless

    you mean Kiba?

    or, you guys can have various characters x Akito.
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to Vienna_Gu

    yes, sorry for not replying, I'm not really using this account anymore

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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    Very good start and I like the how the story goes. You expressed the mc's feeling with details, i love it. keep up the good work author =) [img=recommend]

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    A Hero? No Way.
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    I really like this story, It's really good and mystery about his past intrigues me. You explain how the character feels very well and I like the story so far. Do your best author =)

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    How My Life Was Ruined
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    I really love the story and the funny way to start the story.I love the character development and the way you explain about the character's past or their emotion.

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    Fusion Reincarnation
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to proking

    he's not an orphan actually, he's just passed down from relatives to another. His mother is dead but his father is still alive. He just neglected him but this topic is another time in another chapter. His backstory will be revealed slowly i guess.

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    A Brink Of Insanity
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    I really like the story, it has great story plot, perfect grammars and character development. Glad for censoring the bad words lol. The novel gives me ORV vibes (Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint) \. This novel have a lot of potential and I really enjoy it.

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    Outlast Game - The Ruined World
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    It's a great story and the character's development is also good. There's so many plot twist and the mystery about his past live/incarnation intrigues me. The explanation about the abilities and tiers are understandable. The first few chapters are quite fast paced but it become slow paced in the chapter 11 since it's the beginning of the real story. So far, I really like the story.

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    -deketed---
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    It's a good story plot and it's quite interesting. The mc have a great character development. There are some spelling errors and grammatical errors, might want to fix it. Try to use brackets like ( ) or [ ] for the system mission or status plate so they don't mess up with some paragraphs. Label the conversation on who's talking so they know who's talking with the mc for example " are you okay honey?" - Ace's mom. Sorry if you find it quite offending author

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    SECOND LIFE, AN IDOL.
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    Yuki_082yr
    Commented
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Posted

    Writing skill is great! It express the action,the feelings of the situation and emotions of the characters. The story goes perfectly with the flow and the bit of humor in the story makes it better.

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    Sweet Pea.
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  • Yuki_08
    Yuki_082yr
    Replied to Dao_Of_Sauce

    oop-

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    [{(DROPPED)}]
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