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Yui_8967

Yui_8967

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2021-04-29 JoinedUnited States
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  • Yui_8967
    Yui_89671yr
    Replied to Eveofchaos

    Where would I post it in the discord?

    Ch 423 Making up
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Yui_8967
    Yui_89671yr
    Commented

    Hello author, I've really enjoyed your story so far, and how you right it. Right now I'm a newbie author and have been writing my own story. So far it's only 2 chapters long and the name is Codename: Revenant. I would really love if you can give me any advice on how to create a good story, like yours.

    Ch 423 Making up
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Yui_8967
    Yui_89671yr
    Commented

    Hey author I'm a newbie author and have been creating a story for a long time, but just started writing it recently. I have been reading this book for a long time and really like how you write if you could give me feed back or help me out with my story in any way I would greatly appreciate it.

    Ch 412 Chapter 412: Welcome to The Jungle
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • Yui_8967
    Yui_89672yr
    Replied to HaracasAye

    When did it specifically say she had christian parents? I seemed to have missed that part.

    ...You're just surrounded by the wrong people."
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • Yui_8967
    Yui_89672yr
    Commented

    *AoT theme plays

    ...Not until the walls are completely empty."
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • Yui_8967
    Yui_89672yr
    Commented

    20:50 army time.

    The phone marked eight fifty pm. Khan needed almost an hour to return to his dormitory at a normal pace. It was nearly time for him to stop training, and Lieutenant Dyester had also decided to send him away in the next minutes.
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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