it became a real experience, Althea quickly became a person at my eyes, she being so expressive inside hear head really gave a me a idea what was she going through, I'm hyped for more, and to know more of the rest of the character, Big Bro Miss Reikka, cmonn

omg she said it, she said the thing

search for "Rei chiquita" in YouTube, no balls

"Fun" fact: Males and Women change the tone of their voices when talking to people they like, males make their voice deeper and woman higher.

Noo that's not how you use that phrase!!! lol what a coincidence.

The Second Coming Book from:William Butler Yeats

Saosin-Bury Your head

Freudian slip:In psychoanalysis, a Freudian slip, also called parapraxis, is an error in speech, memory, or physical action that occurs due to the interference of an unconscious subdued wish or internal train of thought. Classical examples involve slips of the tongue, but psychoanalytic theory also embraces misreadings, mishearings, mistypings, temporary forgettings, and the mislaying and losing of objects.

uuu i like thisss

omg, thank you, i get really happy with compliments lol, and I'm kinda thinking doing some third person, Thinking about "Tarumi's acceptance" and "Broken percentage" so I'll take into consideration the third person,thanks a lot again!!

oh yeah, sadness

this is pure gold, honestly i think i may tryto animate this even if it is on my phone

i love this

oh boi, re-reading the whole thing is fun

-Althea

Hey it's Cris from the Adachi to Shimamura subreddit! I liked you novel a lot, but it really felt stuck, like watching an anime who just has a ton of chapters and scatter tiny pieces of the plot here and there while just doing mundane things... you said wanted me to be relentless with the comments but i don't really feel good telling people they're doing wrong xd, specially if it's clear they really put a lot of effort into it, i would love to read more, i think it may be a really hard novel to digest for how slow and lost he novels feels at the start but you did a really good job at the end, i wish to see what more you have for the future