SilvurKlaw
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SilvurKlaw10dCommentedWhen did Jaune pick his shield up? Wasn’t it still on the floor?
He crashes down and slides along the ground a good 20 ft before he manages to stop himself as he loses momentum. As he gets up with a cough and a bit of blood escaping his mouth from the internal injuries He looks to see Iron is already gone and notices a shadow appearing over him. He looks skyward to see Iron behind him already bringing his hammer downward, but with a quicker pace than before. Jaunes only reaction in the time allowed is to bring his shield up to block the blow. And he does indeed block, but his arm also creaks so much that he feels his bones in his arm and shoulder crack from the pressure as he is indented into the floor by a good 4ft deep. The air escapes him along with a small gout of blood from his mouth as he feels his abs and chest muscles become crushed from the force he endures.- SilvurKlaw14dCommented
Which is it? Did he look up or did he not?
The silence was broken by a sudden knock on the door. Axel looked up from where he was sitting in front of a screen making sure that the transfer of the flash clones' neural pattern to that of an A.I. matrix strata would go smoothly. "Come in," he said, not looking up from his work. - SilvurKlaw28dCommented
What do you mean? An entire planet was just evacuated. There’s no way it doesn’t get out to the public.
"I agree with this proposal as we can't openly give them a ceremony since I'm sure we want to keep this a secret from the public. As much as I would like to openly commend them for their efforts, we can't risk this going public" Said General Graham. - SilvurKlaw1mthCommented
You put Vernal instead of April.
"Glad you understand. Now.. Since I'm the one who lead the Raid, I get to decide how to punish you. The Chief might have killed you, given your history and this colossal fuck up on your part.. But since I can see my words are actually being considered? You'll take Shay's place as being the ass of everyone's jokes for a whole month. Get ready, because Vernal is kind of a douchebag when it comes to fucking with people." Yin smirked as she saw Vernal deflate at her punishment. - SilvurKlaw1mthCommented
I think ancient magic affecting his animagus form would be interesting. Like instead of a normal animal he can morph into a magical creature.
Perhaps it also came with new ancient magic abilities….. although Khan had yet to discover any. (A/N: il take some ancient magic suggestions here. Please make it similar spells to game... not like summon dragon or something crazy LOL) - SilvurKlaw2mthCommented
How do you get the name wrong the paragraph immediately after correctly doing so?
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I’m rather enjoying it so far, and I hope to see how it unfolds. Keep up the good work.
Now i need people's opinions in what do they think about it? I guess my biggest mistake was making MC join a Freya Familia and actually getting him charmed for once in all danmachi fanfics. - SilvurKlaw4mthCommented
That’s only 4 runes.
Lastly is the Rune of the King. This rune is placed on the back of the recipient's right hand. This rune gives One the ability to wield the legendary sword Excalibur. This rune is very complicated, and may have unforeseen effects on the recipient, as only one person may have this rune at a time." - SilvurKlaw5mthCommented
Ron’s pet is a rat not a hamster.
For example, Ron owned a spotted hamster, and Lee Jordan from Gryffindor had a pet tarantula. - SilvurKlaw5mthCommentedCh 61 Chapter 61 - Another Colossal Figure and The Chosen Piece
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Still here waiting patiently.
<p>…. Anyone here and alive….</p> - SilvurKlaw6mthCommented
Which is it? Nakiri or Ouryuu?
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This one.
Also as I'm writing this I'm having trouble imagining Godrick in his armor. I've been seeing him in the armor of a Grey Knight Terminator from Warhammer 40k. I think it might be because I'm currently reading a fanfic of a space marine in the world of dnd. So I'd kinda like to have a vote with you all to see if you want to change the armor he is wearing. I'll post a couple of pictures below and see what you guys think. - SilvurKlaw7mthCommented
What happened to his magic armor?
Godrick pressed his advantage and ran at her, right hand on the hilt as his left hand grabbed the sword by the ricasso of the blade where it was duller to be able to grip. He drove it down into the ground, trying to impale Igraine, but missed as she rolled away. As she did, she dragged Clarent up the length of Caliburn, cutting off all four of Godricks finger at the first knuckle. Recoiling in pain, Godrick pulled his left hand back, but the loss of his fingers didn't stop him from ripping Caliburn from the ground and continuing the fight. - SilvurKlaw9mthCommented
Would you have preferred something like Mighteon?
[New Evolution Added: Champeon!] - SilvurKlaw10mthCommented
Why would he try to name her if he realized that she was a human trapped as a bird? Also going right for her real name seems unnatural.
"I'll name you Secre." When she heard what Asher named her, she accidentally swallowed the bread in her mouth. - SilvurKlaw10mthCommented
Bell didn’t say his last name.
"Undisciplined and lacking respect. I will be gracious and instruct you in the ways of a true warrior, Cranel" - SilvurKlaw11mthCommented
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