Silvyr
I have found that I greatly enjoy spending the front half of my nights reading before bed, and there's almost always something new here. It's great.
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Silvyr2yrPostedFrom what I can understand, the book would be good, but I can't make heads or tails from the writing. It's to the point that there are multiple tenses in a single story, they miss using pronouns, so you have no idea who does what or what is happening to other objects in the story, and there is a large amount of inconsistency in the names of things. I believe the main partner of the MC has had Ashlyn, Ashton, and a few other names within the first 50 chapters. It's really unfortunate, too, because all these comments say the grammar and writing quality gets better, but I have around 2 or 3 sentences per chapter to latch onto to try to decypher the story. Nope.
- Silvyr2yrReplied to Bob_Gedd
Do you mind it if they have abs? I hear some call them "waffles." Our Griddle is being renovated right now, so if you want abs-less pancakes, we can put the contract on hold until it's fixed.
2) Cursed random box - Silvyr2yrCommented
Just give him a scarf, or bandana, that would be amazing. Scarves and bandanas are always a good replacement.
'Who would put a collar on their family member?' - Silvyr2yrCommented
All I can think of is the first episode of Indigo League, does that make me old?
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DEUS VOLT DEUS VOLT DEUS VOLT DEUS VOLT - The Crusaders, Probably
Crusaders. - Silvyr2yrReplied to Sadarsa
Except it is, because there's only one Jing Fei
''I'll deal with you too later.'' - Silvyr2yrReplied to Jdubz
Ahhh, chunk o' spleen
Xu Xiaoshou pointed at Zhao Qingteng. "Go and save him quickly. Hiding Pain should have avoided his vital areas, so he won't die from this." - Silvyr2yrReplied to dear_insanity
That... uhm... think about what you just said.
Breathing Technique (Acquired Lv. 1). - Silvyr2yrCommented
So... just capitalism?
"Greedland huh... I wonder what kind of place is this..." Sakim nodded his head as he read the words on the screen - Silvyr2yrReplied to IcyCold
What about a bow and arrow.
Secondly, he needed weapons, especially guns. Even if some of the zombies were immune to bullets, he could still use a gun to protect himself from the basic ones. With guns, he could also maintain a safe distance from the zombies, providing him with a lower chance of getting bitten and infected. Even though it will create noises, it was way better than being on a melee in which he only knew the very basics of the basic moves. And fighting melee has a higher risk of getting bitten by the zombies. - Silvyr2yrReplied to Zereg
Do ants usually have hair?
and lastly, she needs to run 11 Kilometers in one go. - Silvyr2yrReplied to MilkOfCow
It likely depends on the type of acid. But the thing is also magical, so we can't really speculate using our sciences.
Zhou Wen was originally worried that the Mutated Skeleton Ant couldn't swim, but he was immediately relieved when he saw it paddling its claws on the surface of the water and the lotus leaves like a water spider. It crawled at a rapid speed, in no way different than it was on land. - Silvyr2yrReplied to TheAncientOnell
Rationally, it makes sense. Risk your life to obtain metal for the military versus losing it by defying them. I know which I would pick.
"If there was an option to decline, I would have forced my wife to abandon this mission, but sadly, the authority of the military can't be questioned." Mr. Bone sighed. - Silvyr2yrReplied to Tsuzuna
Because rotund means plump. And your previous statement does not mesh with the meaning of the word under any light, ultaviolet or otherwise.
"Heima, you're running late. Today is your Induction Day." A voice travelled into the room before the knob of the door was turned; an apron-wearing lady entered. The woman had black eyes, long nose, cherry lips, and skin that glistened with a faint lustre. Her long black hair that looked like silk was tied up into a bun, giving her a mature charm despite her rotund figure. - Silvyr2yrCommented
Petty. I LOVE IT
He felt so much satisfaction from that. - Silvyr2yrCommented
I really wish he had gone with 'Ghost'
He used it because it meant an extra character or it could mean a more evolved species. A mix of the word extra and the word sort. It was how he viewed himself before, a side-character in everyone's lives, but not a main character anywhere. - Silvyr2yrCommented
An auto furnace!? I want one
The village was empty after they had chased the monsters away with their numbers. They were able to easily take place inside and they even found a smithy the goblins could use. Arthur inscribed a fire rune to them there so they wouldn't need to manually start the furnace. - Silvyr2yrReplied to Badr_Zh
I need to question your reasoning for putting this here. It is unecessary, imature, and betrays your ignorance. I see no reason anybody's relationship, much less a FICTIONAL character should be any of your business. If this truly impacts you this much, simply don't read. I see no reason to act childish in the comments, and potentially ignite someone's previous traumatic experiences. All this does is expose your apathy and ignorance, as well as those of the four others who liked your comment.
He hid since he felt guilty for threatening the servant to sleep with him, afraid his father would see him here. There was also the fact that the servant was a male, too. His father would never give him the throne if he was found out.