ValdenePatriarch

lol! surprised no one has caught that, or at least pointed that out so far. Thank you! 😳

yes, I'm rating my own book, I think it's amazing, so why not?? Just a bit of a heads up, one of the common complaints I have received is that my protagonist doesn't act like an ancient cultivator. please know that there are seasons for this that will make sense as you read! slow burn, but it's worth it!

first off, thank you for checking out my story so far! being that this is my first attempt at writing any and all criticism or feedback is greatly appreciated. I would love to hear your thoughts as to how I could improve the story in the first arc. and on the mistakes and thought process on Darius I assure you these will make sense at a later date. but once again thank you for your time and look forward to hearing how I can make the story more enjoyable for my readers!

I do realize my current release rate isn't the most appealing, so I appreciate you giving my work a chance anyways! You will be happy to know, I do have plans to kick up the release rate with a big update coming soon in the future! Thanks again for reading GoC 🫵🤟

Bagus it is! 🫡🤔

trust me when I say I had a very hard time writing this chapter, but everything has its purpose. 😥

I really appreciate the consistent feedback and motivation! let me know if there is anything you want to see in the future for Darius! would love to hear some ideas from a fan 😀

hopefully it will be worth the wait 🤞

I'm hoping I've handled that issue with later chapters, still struggling to find my style. appreciate the honesty and hope you continue to enjoy!

knew you would like this one. 😊