The more I read all these punctuation errors, spelling errors, and grammatical error, the more it bothers me. I don't even want to finish the book.

I haven't a clue?

And if I can add.... how many times has Regaleon failed in his battles, to only have Alicia bail him out or take over. The reverse is true. Finding these key fragments is important. Magic from them both is useful on this quest.

What do the numbers mean at the end of some paragraphs? Are these editing notes, by chance?

How in the world can Regaleon not know she's pregnant? The telepathic abilities should have shown him something. The baby probably has telepathic powers too. Wolf packs cannot keep these things from each other. ... just saying.

Nalyn! Please edit! That was a terrible read.

The spelling error & grammatical errors impede the flow when reading. I will not read books like this again. Too much waiting, too expensive, and the grammar is horrible. That being said, this is a good story.

Two things: 1. Nalyn, your edit skills are terrible. 2. With the telepathic abilities, how would Alicia keep this pregnancy from him? Seems he would sense it.

So glad this was a quick fix.

Alicia is either incredibly heroic or incredibly weak.

This is my FAVORITE CHAPTER! Thank you Author!

I do enjoy this novel. However, all the spelling errors, grammatical errors, and previous chapter repetition is getting old. This is the most expensive book I have ever read, and will be happy when the novel ends.

I hope Nylan is not getting paid to edit.

I did not like this chapter

Too much love-making has worn her out.

I am so pleasantly surprised how this novel has one climax after another. We have watched Alicia grow up. This is a mini-series!

Almost as if the chapter was written by a woman. Good job, Author.

Hot and Thick Meat Stick! Going to use this line on my husband in the moment. He'll laugh for sure.

Okay, so Leon has a "happy place" and Lilli has a "flower garden"... LOL

Does Leticia also have pure blood powers then? Anxious to see if she uses any.