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Mac_and_dyd

Mac_and_dyd

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2021-04-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mac_and_dyd
    Mac_and_dyd2yr
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    Marc's death seems like a great waste of character to me, although the writer has shown not to do unnecessary things, I worry that all the time spent on the presentation, development and plot will disappear in such an abrupt way. We just have to wait to see how the story unfolds and if a character with a lot of potential was discarded or was it something that helped the story move forward and improve. I love this story and this comment is not trying to criticize the novel, I just doubt if this was the right decision

    Ch 231 2nd Heavenly Punishment! (4)
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    Eternal Thief
    Fantasy · Wahi
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  • Mac_and_dyd
    Mac_and_dyd2yr
    Replied to Qoulus

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    Ch 112 I'm back!~
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    +18 - Harem Palace Sect's System
    Eastern · Morvian
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  • Mac_and_dyd
    Mac_and_dyd2yr
    Posted

    No me gusto el final y el prota es meh. El final final fue extremada mente abrupto, hay cosas por hacer y sub historias por terminar. Por qué todas las mujeres son ninfomanas?.

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    The Perverted Evil Cultivator
    Fantasy · Ero_Saint
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  • Mac_and_dyd
    Mac_and_dyd2yr
    Commented

    Me gusto mucho, pero el final es extremada mente desepsionante

    Ch 244 The most beautiful woman and the most well-kept secret (END)
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    The Perverted Evil Cultivator
    Fantasy · Ero_Saint
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