OnionKnight_DS1

Information is missing both from and in-between chapters, names and genders change randomly, and the system rewards are inconsistent between characters.

He didn't get that.

how much gel and what brand does he use to get and keep his hair like that.

Why is almost everything getting overly described? For instance, it says one guy (don't remember his name) his anger was like a burning field of grass. We don't need to know that, or any of the other extra descriptions for stuff that doesn't matter.

I admit that I'm not too far into the story so I don't know what the rest is like but it's incredibly annoying to have to listen to the overly descriptive sentences. It's unnecessary and just pads the word count.

Not even 30 chapters in and I can't stop laughing at how stupid it is.🤣