Ah yes, the old “I don’t wanna use this thing so I’ll do something else that looks kinda dumb because I can” thing. Glorious

Absolutely bonkers chapter, really made me feel for the characters. It pulled at all the right heart strings and allowed me to insert myself in the place of a bystander watching the story. The line where it said. “MC IS BETA” really resonated with me on a spiritual level.

Amazing work

It’s definitely Phil from the McDonald’s down the street.

Well, hardly believeable in some cases. But I’m the one reading this and not doing it myself, as well as complaining about it being unbelievable when he literally is in a fictional universe.

HOLY GOD, why does he swallow every other sentence. Jesus jiminy Christmas man, get a drink of water or something.

I don’t like it, the story is a bit all over the place.

Top tier Wattpad material, and a good one on webnovel, certainly going to be a fun read

I have decided that this just a bit uncomfortable, and not cringe, I guess that’s kinda how Nero feels but still

Yeah that’s my bad, guess I was reading over it and not through it :/ I’ve just never heard Magnetos power called Magnetokinesis, magnetic manipulation is what I usually read

That’s a spicy meatball right there

Can’t believe he just forgets about Tiamat -.-

How many times is there gonna be an explanation of the 13 Longinus, it’s getting a bit ridiculous

I have no idea how, no idea why, but the phrase. ‘Become experience for me.’ Before killing them is actually kinda cool.

It’s actually a myth that we only use 10% (or five as stated here) of our brains, we use all the parts of our brain just for different things Though someone else might have noticed this and already have written a comment

Ah yes, a ‘coma’ for six hours, this is the true American experience

Ah yes, the super run-on sentences.

What kind of friend beats you because you knocked them into something?, Jesus Christ man

“ am I become retarded” hm, I wonder

Jeebus Christ man, this hurts to read, it’s so repetitive