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Jimbai387010dCommentedLost me here dude. Good luck on the rest of your story.
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Imagine wanting to protect your brother and you have future knowledge or access to it. And don’t abuse it on the justification that your focused on your brother.you contradict yourself and make no sense. It’s just not believable you want to protect someone and know you’re weak and have zero potential to get stronger unless you go find something to do so. Nothing you can say will make sense.
His powers were destructive and powerful, but they were limited in so many ways. Cyclops had been the epitome of a glass cannon and had been forced to face the harsh reality that he could never succeed alone time and time again. It was something Scott realised at that moment, listening to Alex over the sound of the crowd, resisting and fighting against the officers as he was taken away to the car. - Jimbai387021dPosted
Man. I was very interested in this story due to exploring ancient magic and possibly being an op smart character. Instead I got a remarkably idiotic and forgetful character. Admittedly I didn’t get very far in the story. I simply couldn’t take the cliches and things that just plain don’t make sense. How he acts. Characters act. How they speak. If the story gets better later on props to you. But imo I can’t see it getting better with the groundwork you’ve already laid.
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And how do you explain the field guide…? Quick slot spells.. I’m judging hard right now but I’ll continue.
Stopping quickly to open his field guide, he rearranged his fast trigger spells, trading out utility spells like Lumos and Disillusionment for combat oriented spells. Glancing over his Field Guide Challenge completion percentage, it read a clean 100%. Being a Ravenclaw, he took pride in fully completing his field guide, solving all the merlin trials, finding all the missing pages, fully exploring all of Hogwarts and the surrounding hamlets and its secrets, finishing all the combat challenges; all before his O.W.Ls. He was truly looking for forward to finally impressing Professor Weasley; she always seemed the hardest to impress he mused to himself before closing his field guide. - Jimbai387021dCommented
What
Stopping quickly to open his field guide, he rearranged his fast trigger spells, trading out utility spells like Lumos and Disillusionment for combat oriented spells. Glancing over his Field Guide Challenge completion percentage, it read a clean 100%. Being a Ravenclaw, he took pride in fully completing his field guide, solving all the merlin trials, finding all the missing pages, fully exploring all of Hogwarts and the surrounding hamlets and its secrets, finishing all the combat challenges; all before his O.W.Ls. He was truly looking for forward to finally impressing Professor Weasley; she always seemed the hardest to impress he mused to himself before closing his field guide. - Jimbai387021dCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3: The Last Stand of the Longbottoms
- Jimbai38701mthReplied to DiabloRedfox
Nah you should’ve used context clues and your brain a little bit. You can’t do everything for someone.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Jimbai38701mthReplied to GGloserzz_69
You clearly misunderstood what I said.
"Yes. It's time for me to get myself some healing factor and he makes a pretty easy target, especially with your help.", I replied with a proud smile, while carresing Wanda's cheek. - Jimbai38701mthReplied to DiabloRedfox
I’m talking from him being at 30% already buddy
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Clearly he is a god.
Scanning his body inch by inch, the sweeper eventually found out the source of Max's mana prowess, the embedded Agni-Astra as he could not stop giggling at his find. - Jimbai38701mthReplied to heli
No dude. Different systems. Pay attention. Gaia system for omega online the “tutorial” drax is a random AI that would be granted to other gods from different planets.
His brother had the personal A.I. Gaia, the same A.I. that used to run the entire tutorial world of Omega, controlling everything from the quests to the player databases and monitoring their actions. - Jimbai38701mthReplied to SoulCore876
It was like that in sword god because he had so many exp draining artifacts. And titles. And clssses
[ System Remark ] - You are lucky that the opponent you were facing had a weak constitution, the backs of tier 1 opponents don't snap so easily. - Jimbai38701mthCommented
Am I missing something… where are these skills coming from.
Black mist swirled around the many raven corpses littered on the mound, broken pieces of their skeleton slowly coming together. They bonded and fused like there was some sort of invisible glue. - Jimbai38701mthReplied to DragonField
Look up fencers stance.
Reaching the end of the stage, I spin around and take my duelling position. My right leg forward, my left leg behind, ready to spring in any which direction. My torso is to the side, leaving me less exposed to attacks, and my right-hand hold my wand in front of my chest close so as to minimise the area I am exposing, and my left arm is tucked behind my back since it is useless right now, though if I need it while dodging, it will come out. Opposed to my first match all those months ago, my whole body is light, ready to move at a 1moment's notice. - Jimbai38701mthCommented
6.5 years of just doing this to reach 100%
This paragraph has been deleted. - Jimbai38701mthReplied to RaccoonLeague
No bro. YOU are not making sense. That’s not how it works in danmachi
Sensations of power vibrated in each of these numbers, marking the beginning of level 3 for Lucius. Despite not having the 10% bonus, magic remained at a considerable level, keeping him at a nearly average level 4 status. - Jimbai38701mthCommented
Why is he saying it?
"[- Alteration Spell, Ironflesh!]" he uttered, and a dazzling white light flashed on his body, drawing intricate runes before disappearing. The magical alteration in Lucius's resistance became visible, transforming his figure into something more than merely human. - Jimbai38701mthCommented
Thought he was level 4?
"According to our investigation, a group led by Hyakinthos, the level three captain himself, followed Bell Cranel and his group to a bar. There, a member of the Apollo family provoked them, triggering the beginning of the brawl." Ottar's narrative continued, remaining neutral in the face of events. - Jimbai38701mthCommented
This would be op. Cuz it would never end.
[Lightning Spell/Lightning Storm/Rank 4: 20,000,000] (Launches a powerful and continuous lightning bolt) - Jimbai38701mthCommented
Can’t you just spam this and it stacks until everything is dead….lol
[Gravitational Spell/Superior Gravitational Field/Rank 4: 20,000,000] (Creates a large field with 20x gravity in a radius of 30M)