When it said “give up” he really did just give up.

I prefer this

But otherwise hope you’re good

Oh really? I didn’t notice.

You are in urgent need of periods

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The chapters are way too small. You gotta triple it. … like Kami’s D***!!!

Nice

Abbadan’s sword

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This

Its going to be tough to say the least. They are too similar to each other to be sufficiently different. Aikara is just Aqua+, with the same motives, identities and specialities and only differentiated by extra emotional baggage and acting skill. From the very start Ai had a lot of potential for development so when she was shanked at the start it made an AU of one where she didn’t die very interesting. Thus the previous chapter, which was a what if scenario, was very intresting in what it was proposing for the future plot. This is why i think that the what-if scenario should be cannon for the fic. P.S (you should make one where they both survive for bot one but two intresting characters)

Hold on i just figured it out. I still like this one more though.

I’m confused. Am I supposed to vote on which one is cannon or is this just a what is scenario or something? I vote on this one though

Im scared

Its good but it needs more focus on politics

My condolences

Hey, where’s Eric ?!!

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