DeathInside

People write diaries in Douluo, and Bibi Dong criticizes them like crazy On fanmtl

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+1 better

AWESOME! U are really did good job.

+1 At the same time, it will help you to improve your writing style, someday you will want to write a harem, and you already have experience.

Daphne Greengrass ,Fleur Delacour, Luna Lovegood , best choice I think:))))

Too many systems - the author, I hope you will correct this in the future, that it is not the chapter, then his skills and half of the chapter is occupied by the system

Come to me 1x1! I'll shake your hand Cultured person !!!!!

Author, I hope OC / Daphne - OC /any but not Hermione please, there are too many fanfiction with Hermione.

dropped?