SungJinWoo09

For me, this story was great not a generic theme story but have it's owns have a unique trope that I quite like, specially the villains in his system space.., I also like the character of Razael and his journey to overcome the "fate" that was written for him.. the way you wrote the other characters is also good like "celestia" she really got my frustration and so does Selena...aside from them I also quite love the way you wrote Sophia, best girl, she's the only one who really trusted the mc and the one who didn't get led astray by the things she heard from others, instead she find out the truth herself..speaking of the writing itself I do find some parts that felt repetitive and somehow redundant specially but overall this was a good unique story, though I must say some apologies to the author for I didn't really read it here but in some other "sites" after all I really don't have what it takes to unlock the chapters here, but just wanna say I really like your work, so keep it up✌️

Too many characters, I hope you can handle everyone, at least give the other characters a screen time or else they will be nothing but a decor, just for the sake of appearance to look strong and formidable, this might be a challenge for you but I hope you won't drop this novel, and good luck🎉🎉🎉

No update anymore?, what the raw of this author🥹? It was actually good though, Charlotte is also my fav anime hoping you would continue this...

Looks quite promising😍😍, I"ll read it later if there many chapters already, btw, will there be a log horizon world that will be included in here😓😅

Thank you for the chapter🥰🥰

Nice! Thank you for the chapter🥳

Thank you for the chapter🥰🥰

Imma , rate it 5stars even though I didn't read it yet, just knowing it's a tbate fanfic is enough to hook me in this story, sadly there are only few chapters, so I'll probably wait till this would have at least 40-50 chapters, I just hope that you won't drop this story like as there are very few tbate fanfic out there and some are already dropped and not update for many months,, Good luck in your story, and keep it up😍😍🎉🥳

Thank you for the chapter🎉

Why change the mc name?