Saul_Quijano

This novel is just a mess except for the magic system. I would love for this to be professionally edited because I can’t read it as it is. It has to much filler content, like an actual ridiculous amount, the magic system is entertaining but the author makes filler about everything but the magic system. The MC creates all this OP cards for everyone except for himself like a moron. I gave up on reading it, I feel like I was losing brain sells

I like the world and magic system but way too much side character pov stuff, and cut it out with every battle just being a huge info dump of the skills used; the mc has thousands of technics he doesn’t even use