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My friend did something I've almost never seen in an invincible fanfic: he conquered the character in the first few chapters and even had the potential to become an ally. Keep cooking, my friend.

Good comedy, and it's not one of those generic harem types I've seen on this site. It has good, non-irritating humor. I hope to see more of this. That said, good night, since it's 2:29 here.

I was expecting something generic and boring, but I found it perfect: comedy and a protagonist who isn't boring or tedious. Keep cooking like this, man, because somehow a super bored Brazilian is here.

I found it very interesting, even though it only had a few chapters it caught my attention and made me read it very quickly, I hope you continue and know that I will be following along. An important detail, I probably won't comment much on my opinion because I don't do that, but I will always give a power stone to support.

Hello, I usually don't write a comment out of pure laziness, I just send power stones and leave. But this time I will brush up on my English and comment. Congratulations, this fanfic It pulled me in surprisingly despite not having many comments or evaluation I tell you this you are doing a great job, Victor/Morty is a character that made me interestedI wonder what else will happen in the future chapters already released and what problems Morty will cause. In another chapter later on I will comment again.Signed: An anonymous Brazilian and caffeine addict. :)

I find the idea of having him stay with Jinxy more interesting, but I also find the idea of a small harem and following the original story a little interesting.But to be honest, follow the one you think is best or gets the most votes. My recommendation, as I said before, is to follow the original story a little, the chaos that will happen seems interesting.

Harem with a femboy please, Charlie and Vaggie in the harem and if possible Emily Also, my last request is that Camila and Sera also have tall women in a harem.

I would say to just have two girls as MC's love interest, Charlie and Vaggie, the main reason is that it seems to make more sense if the MC ends up with either of them. I know this fanfic won't have a harem, but this is the only "harem" that I think makes sense. You can't have one without having the other. Like cereal and milk. Last thing, if my writing is strange or difficult, I apologize in advance. I am Brazilian and writing in English is still very complicated for me. I almost forgot, thanks for the chapter and continue with the fanfic please, it's starting off really interesting.

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